Which Astronaut Recruitment Video is Better?

This week, we learned that one can apply to be an astronaut just like any other federal job, at USAJobs.gov. (Of course, trying to find any job at USAJobs these days is something of a dicey proposition.)

NASA has even put together a recruitment video for would-be astronauts:

Gavin St. Ours of Baltimore thought that video was just OK, so he took a crack at trying to come up with something a little more inspirational:

Which do you think works better?

(Hat tip: BoingBoing)